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@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
      <varlistentry><term><option>install</option>, <option>remove</option>, <option>purge</option> (&apt-get;)</term>
      <varlistentry><term><option>install</option>, <option>remove</option>, <option>purge</option> (&apt-get;)</term>
      <listitem><para>Performs the requested action on one or more packages
      <listitem><para>Performs the requested action on one or more packages
 	   specified via &regex;, &glob; or exact match. The requested action
 	   specified via &regex;, &glob; or exact match. The requested action
-	   can be overidden for specific packages by append a plus (+) to the
+	   can be overridden for specific packages by append a plus (+) to the
 	   package name to install this package or a minus (-) to remove it.
 	   package name to install this package or a minus (-) to remove it.
      </para><para>
      </para><para>
 	   A specific version of a package can be selected for installation by
 	   A specific version of a package can be selected for installation by
@@ -85,11 +85,11 @@
      </para><para>
      </para><para>
 	   Removing a package removes all packaged data, but leaves usually
 	   Removing a package removes all packaged data, but leaves usually
 	   small (modified) user configuration files behind, in case the
 	   small (modified) user configuration files behind, in case the
-	   remove was an accident. Just issuing an installtion request for the
-	   accidentally removed package will restore it funcation as before in
-	   that case. On the other hand you can get right of these leftovers
-	   via calling <command>purge</command> even on already removed
-	   packages.  Note that this does not effect any data or configuration
+	   remove was an accident. Just issuing an installation request for the
+	   accidentally removed package will restore its function as before in
+	   that case. On the other hand you can get rid of these leftovers
+	   by calling <command>purge</command> even on already removed
+	   packages. Note that this does not affect any data or configuration
 	   stored in your home directory.
 	   stored in your home directory.
      </para></listitem>
      </para></listitem>
      </varlistentry>
      </varlistentry>
@@ -101,17 +101,17 @@
 	   and are now no longer needed as dependencies changed or the package(s)
 	   and are now no longer needed as dependencies changed or the package(s)
 	   needing them were removed in the meantime.
 	   needing them were removed in the meantime.
      </para><para>
      </para><para>
-	   Try to ensure that the list does not include applications you have
-	   grown to like even through they there once installed just as a
+	   You should check that the list does not include applications you have
+	   grown to like even though they were once installed just as a
 	   dependency of another package. You can mark such a package as manually
 	   dependency of another package. You can mark such a package as manually
 	   installed by using &apt-mark;. Packages which you have installed explicitly
 	   installed by using &apt-mark;. Packages which you have installed explicitly
-	   via <command>install</command> are never proposed for automatic removal as well.
+	   via <command>install</command> are also never proposed for automatic removal.
      </para></listitem>
      </para></listitem>
      </varlistentry>
      </varlistentry>
 
 
      <varlistentry><term><option>search</option> (&apt-cache;)</term>
      <varlistentry><term><option>search</option> (&apt-cache;)</term>
      <listitem><para><option>search</option> can be used to search for the given
      <listitem><para><option>search</option> can be used to search for the given
-	   &regex; term(s) in the list of the available packages and display
+	   &regex; term(s) in the list of available packages and display
 	   matches.  This can e.g. be useful if you are looking for packages
 	   matches.  This can e.g. be useful if you are looking for packages
 	   having a specific feature.  If you are looking for a package
 	   having a specific feature.  If you are looking for a package
 	   including a specific file try &apt-file;.
 	   including a specific file try &apt-file;.
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
      <listitem><para>Show information about the given package(s) including
      <listitem><para>Show information about the given package(s) including
 	   its dependencies, installation and download size, sources the
 	   its dependencies, installation and download size, sources the
 	   package is available from, the description of the packages content
 	   package is available from, the description of the packages content
-	   and many more. It can e.g. be helpful to look at this information
+	   and much more. It can e.g. be helpful to look at this information
 	   before allowing &apt; to remove a package or while searching for
 	   before allowing &apt; to remove a package or while searching for
 	   new packages to install.
 	   new packages to install.
      </para></listitem>
      </para></listitem>
@@ -149,18 +149,18 @@
    </variablelist>
    </variablelist>
  </refsect1>
  </refsect1>
 
 
- <refsect1><title>Script usage and Differences to other APT tools</title>
+ <refsect1><title>Script Usage and Differences from Other APT Tools</title>
   <para>
   <para>
-   The &apt; commandline is designed as a end-user tool and it may
-   change behaviour between versions. While it tries to not break
-   backward compatibility there is no guarantee for it either if it
-   seems benefitial for interactive use.
+   The &apt; commandline is designed as an end-user tool and it may
+   change behavior between versions. While it tries not to break
+   backward compatibility this is not guaranteed either if a change
+   seems beneficial for interactive use.
   </para><para>
   </para><para>
    All features of &apt; are available in dedicated APT tools like &apt-get;
    All features of &apt; are available in dedicated APT tools like &apt-get;
    and &apt-cache; as well.  &apt; just changes the default value of some
    and &apt-cache; as well.  &apt; just changes the default value of some
-   options (see &apt-conf; and specifically the Binary scope). So prefer using
-   these commands (potentially with some additional options enabled) in your
-   scripts as they keep backward compatibility as much as possible.
+   options (see &apt-conf; and specifically the Binary scope). So you should
+   prefer using these commands (potentially with some additional options
+   enabled) in your scripts as they keep backward compatibility as much as possible.
    </para>
    </para>
  </refsect1>
  </refsect1>